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Originally Posted by Combwork
Perfect. Apart of course in line 2 of the final paragraph where either an s should be put on the end of kid or their should be changed to her
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Missed that one. I had originally written it thinking that Hillbilly had two daughters bit realized he referred to only one so I went back and modified it.
John
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Last edited by Boreas; 08-28-2010 at 07:35 AM.
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